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• לפני 15 שנים ו-1 חודשים Matthew LightOne

  

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  Seth, a longtime friend and bartender, he cleaned the bar with a handkerchief and sparkling asked him: "Well, there's someone interesting?
  "Certainly, certainly." Matthew answered without hesitation. The club was full of people standing side by side. He smiled a few girls who looked at him. There, potential, he thought.
  He said the first blonde woman went with an open bar. She looked in his late twenties, her bright green eyes, beautiful face, long legs and Management tan chest. She was wearing a white T-shirt Decoupage flattered her shapely figure. He turned to Seth, his companion, advisor to life exciting. "Tell me, how about this?" He pointed to her chin.
  Seth looked at him briefly examined her from head to toe. "You look good. Excellent, even. Go for it, that you have to lose?" I do not see other options ".
  "You know her?" He asked.
  He shrugged his shoulders. "I've never seen her in this place."
  Matthew integral mass, arose and went to her quickly, the level of difficulty through the crowd. He was not Robert Pattinson, and have the same magic that attracts girls, charming smile, intelligence, and let's not ignore the facts, even a long penis.
  When he finally introduced himself, "Hello", he said: "I am dead." He noticed the pleasant smell of perfume drifted from her neck. Another point in its favor.
  Michelle. She smiled and shook his hand. "Nice."
  He invited her to drink whiskey at his own expense. Supplemental deafening roar of rock music.
  "You come to Sudyon" often "?" Matthew asked, almost shouting to be heard above the noise of music and the audience.
  "My first time".
  "You're new in the area?"
  "No, I live with my sister in a rented house near the beach. My close friends have advised me about this place."
  Matthew smiled. "Well, how has your experience been so far?"
  She hesitated for a moment. "This place is fun, but crowded and noisy here too much for my taste."
  "So what? Cut me? Mrkok I live on the street, 24 in two minutes from the hotel. There will not be noisy and crowded, I promise."
  "Why not?"
  They came out of "discussion" darkness outside. Half Moon-Abevezvc from rain clouds, illuminating the white shadow of the pale faces. Matthew walked her to his bright-white Jaguar. He spent most of their savings in salaries in two months. He opened the door for her, Ahtiyesab behind the wheel and breathed deeply into the lungs, intoxicating aroma of new leather upholstery.
  "Otto's great," she said and smiled a charming smile. The song "Away From The Sun" group "Doors Down" came from the radio and Matthew turned the volume. The trip took them silently. Michelle put her head on the cool glass and watched the scenery Pnyhim passed quickly.
  The car was smooth asphalt road Snynzc drop was more rapid cranking and then Lmonteim Sturiider Str. Matthew stopped by the opening of an old house, cut the engine.
  He did not notice a huge man - later hiding in the bushes, sizes and watched the movements of his body. But you can not blame him, this man was a professional.
  Matthew opened the door of the building. They climbed the stairs big Bahtanspweut shortly. Damn, I thought of Matthew, from a few Matthew opened the door of the building. They climbed the stairs big Bahtanspweut shortly. Damn, I thought of Matthew, from a few thousand buildings in Las Vegas, in fact I have to live in a walkup?
  A huge man - size turned to see if nobody looks at him, and after its adoption, step briskly, jumping almost construction.
  Matthew and Michelle entered the great hall. Matthew spent a lot of money and effort to look good - taste. Expensive furniture, neatly arranged on the sides of the cost of expensive Italian rug stretched from wall to wall. LCD TV 42 inch Sony was on a glass table in the corner.
  "Beautiful," she said. He hugged her, and she did the same thing. Touching hands moved to the cold wave is nice.
  "Not as good as you", he meant to lean to her and kissed her lips, when lightning ignited his pain. Matthew collapsed on the floor, completely exhausted. He turned his head and force her back to the door and saw a big man - a huge man - standing in the doorway. He was dressed in a black suit that looked several sizes too small for him a long scar, decorated his face.
  "What the hell? Who ... Atslatak here before you call the police.
  Give the man back from his pocket Sig - Zager and held her tightly temples Matthew. "One more word out of this room will be filled with thousands of pieces Give a man back from his pocket Sig - Zager and held her tightly temples Matthew." One more word out of this room will be filled with thousands of pieces of my mind. You see? "Voice of Rights was a deep, obsessive, almost frightening.
  Matthew and swallowed and nodded his head, still shocked by the intensity of injury. Michelle sat on the concrete wall next to them with folded hands and watched the game with sparkling eyes, as if everything came in sight, and she does not know anything again. It is easy to deceive people, she thought. All she needed to do was say that it is Matthew calls her sister, so as not to return tonight. He swallowed the bait easily. She pulled away and reaches a quiet shaded Matthew and swallowed and nodded, still shocked by the intensity of injury. Michelle sat on the concrete wall next to them with folded hands and watched the game with sparkling eyes, as if everything came in sight, and she does not know anything again. It is easy to deceive people, she thought. All she needed to do was say that it is Matthew calls her sister, so as not to return tonight. He swallowed the bait easily. She pulled away and reaches a quiet shady corner. She calls, and not her sister, of course, but to share. This is the result.
  The man finally let go his grip on the body of Matthew, but he continued to aim the gun. "Listen to me carefully, the brain - a bird, you sit on that couch and get nothing. You do not know me, I can do things very strange and cruel." He nodded toward the orange couch, which was nearby. Matthew got up quietly from his seat on the floor, hands raised to the - on, and sat there.
  "Olivia", the man turned to her. Matthew wondered how he knew her. Olivia? "Help me get out of the apartment."
  Or, Olivia Michelle, or whatever her name, nodded and began to apply in a plastic bag valuables in the house: 5 Am.fi., laptop, rather - V - D, home phone, computer speakers, microwave, stereo system.
  Matthew looked at her and could not believe his eyes. Is partner rights. She worked on him shamelessly and are now trying to rob him. Quick change of events puncher hit his head began. Until now, only read things like books or seen them in film tension and action. I never thought it could be robbed. It is still not caught in the head. I do something, he thought. The man looked at her, but the menacing muzzle Matthew snapped cold stare, as if to say: "If you do something like that, Aforar Agopap several short shots and all that you will keep the blood and body Satchin jets with time. Want to see a huge sense of this?
  He tried to suppress thoughts of my head. Man does not look at him. It was an opportunity not to be missed. Matthew got too soft and his body bent, and walked on tiptoe to the villain, who helped Olivia. He said both his hands in a fist position and jumped on his back. The huge movement of the hand was - man. Bible Matthew seconds behind his back and shook his hand, as people Aksksim shaking his head. Matthew fell to the ground hard, but quickly recovered. He tried to throw a blow in the face of man, but he was not injured. Man to avoid movement and began to blow his nose against Matthew, breaking the force of impact. Deep pain and cut his face with a sharp knife and he collapsed to the floor countless times - I know - as far as this evening. American brainless! " Bellowed a man came on his face, intense than the previous one. Dizzy, only half of consciousness. Or has already passed, he was not sure. "He heard a few minutes later the sound of a door opening and cotton, but was not sure if he tried to suppress the real thoughts of my head. Man does not look at him. It was an opportunity that should not be missed. Matthew got too soft and his body bent, and walked on tiptoe to the villain, who helped Olivia. He pointed out both hands in a fist position and jumped on his back. Huge hand movement was - a man. The Bible Matthew seconds from behind and shook his hand, as people Aksksim shaking his head. Matthew fell to the ground hard, but quickly recovered. He tried to throw a blow in the face of man, but he was not injured. The man began to move and avoid nose blow against Matthew, overcoming the force of impact . The deep pain and cut his face with a sharp knife and he fell to the floor countless times - I know - as far as this evening. "American brainless!" bellowed a man came on his face and intense than the previous one. Dizzy, only half of consciousness. or has already occurred " He was not sure. He heard a few minutes the sound of a door opening and cotton, but was not sure if the real voice, and was formed fabrications.
  When he raised his head, his vision is still blurred. But this was not enough to understand that the hall was completely empty of objects, and a couple of people missing.
  

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