פורומים » סיפור שכתבתי
כתבת סיפור למגירה? זה הזמן לשתף את קהילת הקוראים הישראלית ולקבל חוות דעת.
כתיבת הודעה חדשה בפורום סיפור שכתבתי
» נצפה 779 פעמים מאז תחילת הספירה.
-
לפני 15 שנים ו-2 חודשים Sophie עיניים משתנות
סתם סיפור שלא קשור לכלום. אמרו לנו לכתוב סיפור קצר לשיעור אנגלית, אז תירגמתי סיפור שכתבתי מזמן מזמן....
Sophie woke up terrified from nightmare. It was dark and she could not see anything. "This is very real nightmare," Sophie thought, "almost like it's real." Sophie remembered it very well. It started in wonderful day when she went to Nina, her friend. Then she had a strange feeling something was going to happen. But she kept walking. Sophie went home to get Nina's wristwatch, the one that Nina forgot at her home only yesterday. When she went downstairs she saw Nina standing on the other side of the street and calling her. Sophie started to run.
Then it came. The white car seemed to sophie a lot bigger then she thought a car could be. She remembered Nina screaming, creaking brakes and terrible pain. All sophie thought about it in the final seconds was the wristwatch.
Sophie shook off the memory. The flash back was so scary. So Realistic. So true. "How lucky, it was just a dream!" Sophie said out loud. she was unable to convince herself thet it's true, Because Darkness covered everything. "People say thet the darkest Hour at night is just before dawn. They are right." Sophie thought to herself. At that moment the sun began to rise.
Suddenly she saw thet she is lying on the road. That her clothes and the road covered with red-brown liquid, a lot of it. Sophie did not understand why she was sleeping on the road. Why everything is so dirty. She only knew that her parents must be angry. Sophie wanted to go home, but she couldn't open the door to the lobby. She began to suspect something was really wrong. So sophie start walking up the street.
As she began walking, she heard someone get out of her building. Sophie turned around and just... screamed. She stared at the building door and said to herself that it doesn't make sense. She saw someone who looked just like her, impostor. Sophie's impostor looked exactly like Sophie. Sophie looked at the road and the liquid disappeared. The worst thing was thet Sophie's impostor wasn't even responded to a scream, like she didn't heard it. So Sophie followed her.
After a while she discovered that no one can see or hear her. The nightmare repeated itself, becomes real in front of her eyes. becase sophie knew what was going to hapned. She warned her impostor Before the impostor went up home. Only then she realized why she had a feeling of anticipation for disaster in the nightmare.
After a few minutes Sophie's impostor came down. Sophie saw her running a cross the street. Then, a car, white and old arrive. It was driving fast. The car hit Sophie's impostor and stopped in creaking brakes. While the impostor fell, her blood splattered on the road. Sophie saw Nina screaming in fear.
Nina called the hospital. Sophie saw the ambulance arrives. Luckily, she entered before the ambulance doors closed. One of the medics passed through her. Sophie began to understand what's happened. She saw Nina and her parents waiting outside the operating room. The doctor came out and said, "I'm sorry, we did everything we can, but unfortunately sophie is gone." Sophie was shocked.
She heard, "You know, It's real." But of course she didn't turn around. "You really dead, Sophie." She turned, sure thet the voice was speaking another girl name Sophie. She saw an old man staring at her. "Are You talking to me?" She asked, waiting for the old man ignores her. "Sure. you see another girl called Sophie?" The old man said. She thought she couldn't be more surprised. "But no one can see me." She said, aware that it sounds childish. "Except me. people thet still alive cann't hear the dead. except for special cases." the old man explained. "I'm your dizamoon, honey." he siad quietly. Sophie was confused. "Diza-what?" She asked. "Your dizamoon. What people stupidity call it a guardian angel. it's not true, because I met some pretty nasty dizamoon's." He said.
Sophie stared at the old man. Already she knew that she will remember this day forever. After all, it was the day she died.
הוסף תגובה | קישור ישיר להודעה-
לפני 15 שנים ו-2 חודשים יש לך אנגלית מצויינת, ודרך אגב, אחלה סיפור ~דניאל~ (ל"ת)
-
לפני 15 שנים ו-2 חודשים תודה עיניים משתנות
-
-
